Mystery narrative

Hello my fellow blogging people, In literacy we have been working a little bit on mysteries, we watched some scooby do and chip n dale to give us an idea on what we were doing and what a good mystery was like, we made an imaginary character to be the Main Character, here is my narrative.

The stolen Shrek chains

On a lovely calm, Sunday Paul was awoken by a raver interesting noise as he opened his eyes he found Bobby his sausage dog towering over him begging him to take him out on a walk, so he got out of bed, had some breakfast got dressed and headed out, it was really warmer than usual and it was really muggy so wasn’t amazing but was really calm. On the way, they stopped in at a cafe for a drink, after the cafe they headed for the dog park for a quick run around before they went home.

While Bobby and Paul were at the dog park they met there biggest enemy from the dog fashion show CLARK they never got along they stared each other down right into there soul, 

“Bobby lets go, buddy,” Paul asked 

They strode home. When they got back paul had a look where his Shrek chain was and it was gone and when he looked at the case it was unlocked 

”HOW DID THIS HAPPEN” paul yelled

And Bobby’s was gone too, they had to get to the bottom of this! Because coming up is a dog fashion show and if they win it would be there 10th consecutive win and it was a big one too and very competitive 

Paul decided to ring the police to get an investigation on who stole them and where they are.

The police arrived and asked some questions, in conclusion, they got some detectives to come in and have a look at some fingerprints and got some evidence, after a while they hadn’t found any evidence no fingerprints nothing at all, 

“ they must have worn gloves because if there is no evidence at all,” said paul

So they decided to go to the pinboard to see if they could get some answers? They went into what time they were out if they sore anyone that they knew while they were out, the only people they saw where some friends that they weren't too close with and their dog fashion show enemy! The only person they could think of was their enemy so they thought the only person that would have stolen the chains so they went to his house and asked him some questions but got nothing to help so they went back to the pinboard when paul got a phone call from there enemy’s cousin to say he might know something that might help so he came over to help but he was being really annoying and a bit suspicious almost and then when they raped it up for the night the cousin rob let paul and boobys enemy Craig on some secrets to let him know what they might do or search so he can win the fashion shows and lose their winning streak. 

The next day came and they searched the house of everyone one who had competed against bobby and paul in the fashion shows to see if they have the chains and funnily enough they found them and you wanna guess who it was...CRAIG THE ENEMY! And once they had found it out Rob said I told him what and where you would search and look for the chains but that was all false and were the EXACT locations where you were going to look.

In the end, he was sentenced to 3 years in prison for robbery and also the adfc (America dog fashion council) found out he was going to pay the judges with money to give them low scores so he could win so he also fined 50,000 dollars and was banned from any more fashion shows same with the judgers.