Hello every one it is Noah here this is my first post of 2018 at my new school. In writing we have been doing show don't tell writing on monuments or tourist attractions and I choose the Statue of liberty. Here is my writing on the statue of liberty, ENJOY:)
The Statue of Liberty
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When we got off the fairy we looked around then our tummy sensed that we were hungry so we walked over to where some corn dogs were sold, When I munched down on a corn dog my taste buds where infused with the taste great taste. When we were finished we decided to take one look when My ears sensed countless of people talking and laughing away Suddenly the fairy's horn bursted out with a big yell. When we started the 354 step climb butterflies entered my tummy, when we were at the top my legs almost crumbled from how nervous I was. When we looked down the people where like little dots scuttling around. We had had enough of the top so we headed back down when CRASH! A umangise wave came in and splashed heaps of people. Finally we had reached the bottom, my legs felt like jelly and I could hardly stand up. THE END!!
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