kia ora bloggers, in writing we are partnering up with Fairfield school in hamilton, we have been doing many tasks with them, one of them was about a journey and path poem, we had to write 6 lines with 6 words in each. I wrote about when me and my family stayed in Greymouth, I hope you like it!
The aggressive waves crash over the top.
The perfectly rounded and edged rocks stacked
My dad be my side stunned
One rock came out to me
Time away from Greymouth top10 camp
I wish I brought maple syrup
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
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Hi Noah
ReplyDeleteI can agree that Greymouth is one of the best camps, don't no why you need maple syrup and that will be nice to know and next time you could work on your grammar
Hi Nikita, thank you for the feed back I put the maple syrup because it was about pancake rocks near Grey mouth for you information, I spotted the spelling I'll change that :)
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